What translation of the Iliad is the best?

  1. The characters you need to pay attention to are —
    • Greeks: Achilles, Patroclus, Agamemnon, – Menelaus, Diomedes, Nestor, Odysseus, Aias
    In Troy: Hector, Paris/Alexandros, Helen, Priam, – Sarpedon, Aeneas Neutral-ish gods: Zeus, Thetis
    • Gods allied to Troy: Apollo, Aphrodite, Ares
    • Gods allied to the Greeks: Athena, Hera, Poseidon
  2. Most modern editions are fine. Caroline Alexander’s translation is a notable one from the last ten years, and she’s got a poetic style. Stanley Lombardo’s translation has the best track record among new readers. Also popular are the ones by Robert Fagles and Robert Fitzgerald.
  3. Worst ones:
    • Richmond Lattimore
    • Stephen Mitchell. His version leaves out most of the epithets.
    • Old translations
  4. A quick comparison of some of the translations:
  5. Stanley Lombardo:
    • The Myrmidons shuddered, and to a man
    • Could not bear to look at it. But Achilles,
    • When he saw it, felt his rage seep
    • Deeper into his bones, and his lids narrowed
    • And lowered over eyes that glared
    • Like a white-hot steel flame.
    Robert Fagles:
    • A tremor ran through all the Myrmidon – ranks — none dared
    • to look straight at the glare, each fighter shrank away.
    • Not Achilles. The more he gazed, the deeper his anger went,
    • his eyes flashing under his eyelids, fierce as fire —
    Robert Fitzgerald:
    • Myrmidons
    • began to tremble at the sound, and dared not
    • look straight at the armor; their knees shook.
    • But anger entered Akhilleus as he gazed,
    • his eyes grown wide and bright as blazing fire, …
    Caroline Alexander:
    • And trembling took all the Myrmidons, nor did any dare
    • to look upon it straight, and they shrank afraid; but Achilles
    • as he gazed upon it, so anger entered him all the more, and his eyes
    • terribly shone out beneath his lids like fire flare …

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